Overall in my two blog series,I think I did better in blog series 2 than in blog series 1.There are two reasons as to why I have this claim,and they're summaries and the movies I saw for my writing assignments.I write better summaries than essays and what I saw mostly in blog series 2.In blog series 1 however,I was just beginning to understand the order of claim,reason,and evidence so most of my essays in blog series 1 has some reasons that weren't clear or made sense to support my claims.
In blog series 1,I basically had a hard time posting my blogs on time due to my lack of focus and concentration in finishing my essays.I'm not really good at writing essays so some of the essays in series 1 are "rough around the edges".I had some problems specifically in blogs 5 and 6 because I had a hard time summarizing the article "The Allegory of the cave" and describing my life to the article until I saw the video about the "Allegory of the cave".Despite some problems in series 1,I do clearly explain my claims in the essays that ask for claim.
In blog series 2,watching the movies,"The Truman Show and The Matrix" improved my reasons and evidence in order to write my essays.I can understand any movie I watch for the first time so it was esay to complete my writing assignments.Writing comments about the two movies felt more natural because I writing my opinions on someone claims about the movies.
Again,as I said overall,I prefer blog series 2 than blog series 1 because it was easier to me.I think I did an ok job on both series regardless of some difficulties.I honestly hope that blog series 3 has less blogs to write than series 1 and 2.
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